Ar Iau, 2006-09-21 am 23:18 +0200, ysgrifennodd Michael Opdenacker:
> -<para>There's an <emphasis>ethernet</emphasis> gadget
> +<para>There's an <emphasis>Ethernet</emphasis> gadget
NAK, Ethernet is/was indeed a proper noun but it has become generic
> -and associated transciever to support <emphasis>Dual-Role</emphasis>
> +and associated transceiver to support <emphasis>Dual-Role</emphasis>
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> - value which selects the corresponding interrupt decription structure
> + value which selects the corresponding interrupt description structure
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> interrupt hardware and was therefore reimplemented with split
> - functionality for egde/level/simple/percpu interrupts. This is not
> + functionality for edge/level/simple/percpu interrupts. This is not
ACK - also per-cpu with hyphens ?
> - <title>The Linux Journalling API</title>
> + <title>The Linux Journaling API</title>
NAK. See previous multiple discussions.
> The preferred method of initializing structures is to use
> - designated initialisers, as defined by ISO C99, eg:
> + designated initializers, as defined by ISO C99, eg:
NAK. Policy is to keep existing language usage not Americanize nor
Anglicize.
> -you hold the lock, noone can delete the object, so you don't need to
> +you hold the lock, no one can delete the object, so you don't need to
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> - support second drives on a port (such as SATA contollers) will
> + support second drives on a port (such as SATA controllers) will
> use ata_noop_dev_select().
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> - Higher-level hooks, these two hooks can potentially supercede
> + Higher-level hooks, these two hooks can potentially supersede
NAK - Supercede is correct
> - ATA_QCFLAG_ACTIVE is clared from qc->flags.
> + ATA_QCFLAG_ACTIVE is cleared from qc->flags.
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> - requirement during issuing or excution any ATA/ATAPI command.
> + requirement during issuing or executing any ATA/ATAPI command.
NAK. Please check changes before submission
> </para>
>
> <itemizedlist>
> @@ -951,7 +951,7 @@ and other resources, etc.
>
> <listitem>
> <para>
> - !BSY && ERR after CDB tranfer starts but before the
> + !BSY && ERR after CDB transfer starts but before the
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> last byte of CDB is transferred. ATA/ATAPI standard states
...
Please also submit each set of changes separately
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